Starscream's Brigade

[Shadow]

OK... As some of you know Bumblebee1983, Megatron42 and myself are writing a fan-fic. I would like some feedback. I added the Combaticons in the fan-fic as soldiers of Starscream being their first time appering they fought for Starscream in the episode Starscream's Brigade. I changed some of them to give them a more up-to-date feel. Onslaught is now a M109 Paladin Howitzer Artillery unit. Blastoff is now a F-35 Lightning. Vortex i left as a Black Hawk. Brawl I left as a M1-A1 Abrams tank. And Swindle I changed to a Stryker APC. if the Combaticons were to ever be on the big screen I feel it only right that they fight for Starscream.

[Bumblebee1983]

OK... As some of you know Bumblebee1983, Megatron42 and myself are writing a fan-fic. I would like some feedback. I added the Combaticons in the fan-fic as soldiers of Starscream being their first time appering they fought for Starscream in the episode Starscream's Brigade. I changed some of them to give them a more up-to-date feel. Onslaught is now a M109 Paladin Howitzer Artillery unit. Blastoff is now a F-35 Lightning. Vortex i left as a Black Hawk. Brawl I left as a M1-A1 Abrams tank. And Swindle I changed to a Stryker APC. if the Combaticons were to ever be on the big screen I feel it only right that they fight for Starscream.

*raises hand*

Me likey!!! Me likey!!! :D

[IMT Guyver]

Nice i like it as well.

I could just see that on the big screen.

[xXRavenXx]

I feel left out :o

I would add in a predator, and that SR-71 looking X fighter they launch at high altitudes. The Scram-Jet craft.

You also gotta think about how the combaticons got turned away from Screamer by Megs because Screamer lied to them! He's a treacherous lil bastage!

[Bumblebee1983]

I feel left out :o

I would add in a predator, and that SR-71 looking X fighter they launch at high altitudes. The Scram-Jet craft.

You also gotta think about how the combaticons got turned away from Screamer by Megs because Screamer lied to them! He's a treacherous lil bastage!

Awww now you aren't left out hon!

Now you aren't in the writing process, but you could be in the extra set of eyes overlooking it process.

when it is done. All in good time....all in good time....:cool:

[Shadow]

Awww now you aren't left out hon!

Now you aren't in the writing process, but you could be in the extra set of eyes overlooking it process.

when it is done. All in good time....all in good time....:cool:Ya sorry Raven. We got into the story and with to many people working on a project at the same time, it would have made a real mess of things. In a movie you dont ever hear of more then two or three writers. We just wanted to keep it as simple as we could.

[guitarded]

Cool Idea guys!