Need some advice and pointers...

[Cold As Ice0004]

I just finished working on a commercial for 89X. Its an alternative/rock station here in the Detroit, Windsor area.

They have a contest going so I tried a little something. The quality of this one sucks cause uploading to youtube is a drag. The real thing was shot in HD.

Creative, No? Comments! Pointers!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=DF9DrzJFieo

[uraydo]

I can barely under stand the guy.

It's an interesting idea, but I think it needs some tweeking. Also, I don't really get the feel of this being a rock commercial... which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

[Cold As Ice0004]

Thanks for dropping a comment, I appreciate it man.

[guitarded]

Yah dude...need to speak a tad slower, and clearer


I don't feel the rock/alternative commercial either. Seems somewhat plain. The idea will work, just Jazz it up a little